Hiz
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RappingDo any of you lot MC here? I know lax does, and he's quite good at it. Lax, if you see this then post some of your bars Does anybody else here mc?
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Danaldinho
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Its Funny You Should Say This Hiz
As Lately I've Been Writing Some Lyrics Down
Its Like A Hobby For Me, I Just Like Doing It
But I Never Record Stuff
I Also Like Making Beats Up, Like My Mate Likes MC'ing And He Free Styles Alot And I Made This Beat For Him
Also Alot Of People In Our School Listen And Like MC'ing
But I'm More Of A Rap/Hip Hop Person
And Cool Lax, Please Post Some Stuff, It Will Be Interesting
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Lax
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Yeah well Hiz thanks for making this topic. Yeah I make lyrics
Was on the Dj decks today at school 
Well heres some bars
LAX COPYRIGHT
Will post new ones everyday
i sit ther on msn
buh baby ur the 1s dahs live
all i want is u2 be mine
we can be jus like bony nd clyde
Lax copyright IM serious ye
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Hiz
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Nice, but i've heard better ones from you
Also, why you using so much slang today? Lol.
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Lax
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| Hiz wrote: | Nice, but i've heard better ones from you
Also, why you using so much slang today? Lol. |
I don't write in slang only in my bars. Becuase you have to write your bars quickly before you forget hehe. Yeah. All my bars are in slang form :sorry: :googlyeyes: Well I have loads anyway all in 1 notepad file. Would be nice to see some other people's too
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Hiz
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Yeah i know what you mean. Dan, post some
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Danaldinho
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I Will Post Some On Here Tomoz As I Have To Re-Install Microsoft Office And I Have Them All Saved In Documents On My Desktop
I Love Writing Stuff Down Though
Its Like A Passion For Me
And Nice Bars There Lax
Also Every One Laughs At Mine, Because I Rap About Things Like What I Like
For Instance: Rice Pudding Lol (I Love It)
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Hiz
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Hiz and Lax, reppin le4 street
makin girls on der own, feel com-plete
we pik up pace at da speed of light,
pik up da pace and rock da mic
no one can rock da mic beta,
so shut ur mouth and say we da masterz
we eint blak or we eint no rastas
I made all of them except the last line, which lax made
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Danaldinho
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Thats Very Good That Hiz
Amazing, Proper Good
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Hiz
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Btw - Thats the first (ever) time, i've wrote bars down lol.
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Lax
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Nice Hiz (Y)
Here's mine:
i'll get on the mic and blow ur mind
barz r sik u'll comit suicide
get on stage and start 2 rhym
get top of the chart and start 2 shine
afta the dust settles... that crown is mine
So insted of h8ing let me spit anofa line
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Hiz
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lol, their wicked lax!!
You made some in the science y'day lol.
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Lax
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Yeah LOL. I bougt a writing pad today to write ma bars in lessons
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Danaldinho
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Guys Some Amazing Bars There
I'll Have To Start Mine Again, Because Of my Stupid Brother
Anyway Keep Them Coming
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Hiz
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Yeah, you post some aswell
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Lax
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everytime i c u i feel im on cloud 9
for u i'll always have time
becuase at the end of the day ur mine
every1 will be finking how did god make a couple so fine?
Theres a good one
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Hiz
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Lol nicee, Dan, post some
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!Charlie!
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is this film really new
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Lax
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| !Charlie! wrote: | | is this film really new |
:spam: What film
bby cum 2 me nd ill releive ur pain
wen ur in ma arms u'll go insane
me nd u apart its such a shame
ur ma wifey nd u gta hektik name
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!Charlie!
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very sorry is this a film or what
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Danaldinho
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No Its Not
And Some Good Ones There Lax
I'll Post Some Of Mine Later
But I've Been Busy Alot Lately
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!Charlie!
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so its rapping music
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Danaldinho
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| !Charlie! wrote: | | so its rapping music |
Well
Its Like A Topic Were You Post Some Lyrics/Bars What You've Thought Up Of
Like I Know Hiz And Lax Are Good At This
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!Charlie!
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i will post here when i have some ok
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Danaldinho
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| !Charlie! wrote: | | i will post here when i have some ok |
Ok Please Do And I Will After Hopefully
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!Charlie!
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thank you for telling me danny m
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Lax
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Lyrics arnt something you can just write in 5 minutes, They have a significant meaning to them. IF you just wrrite for jokes then ytour bars are crap, your bars should come from your heart and should mean something to you. So !Charlie! if your're going to write some lyrics that doesnt't have a meaning dont wastte your time and that goes for everyone. People just want to become a mc to star on MTV or something. Lyrics are 1 part to rapping you aslo got to Mix and Spit on the Mic. Sorry Lads but that's reality. And also !Charlie! I havent posted much here but I think your a spammer but hey that's mmy opinion.
-Lax
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Danaldinho
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Lax Is Right There !Charlie!
And Good Post Above And Its Right What You've Said
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Lax
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plenty of shit going down in ma life
1 gyal dnt wna be ma wife
rents argueing wid me all ma life
maybe i should jus cut my throat wid a nife
sitting here pen 2 paper riting dese bars
shedding tears as i feel im trapped in a jar
as veesh has sed "in life u gta find ur door"
but wot if lifes treating u poor?
but a kant do much more
now u gta beleive me. y would i lie for?
i'll jus get on the mic nd get wot i need
dont neeed all this bullshit nd greif
wen im down in the street on my own
manz kalling me crazy ova da fone
how could i walk away from ma fam on my own?!
all dese manz judge a book by its cover
jus kuz am brown dont mean im gna b like all da ofas
walking the le4 streets nd im on my own
f*k every1 else i dont kare where dey go
i'll be the 1 in the studio dropping beats like kano
Comment people wrote them yesterday. Thanks
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BEB
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Im sorry I dont get how you can class 'rapping' as actual music.
Just my view, im not into it at all.
But good lyrics guys, keep em coming
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Danaldinho
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| Lax wrote: | plenty of shit going down in ma life
1 gyal dnt wna be ma wife
rents argueing wid me all ma life
maybe i should jus cut my throat wid a nife
sitting here pen 2 paper riting dese bars
shedding tears as i feel im trapped in a jar
as veesh has sed "in life u gta find ur door"
but wot if lifes treating u poor?
but a kant do much more
now u gta beleive me. y would i lie for?
i'll jus get on the mic nd get wot i need
dont neeed all this bullshit nd greif
wen im down in the street on my own
manz kalling me crazy ova da fone
how could i walk away from ma fam on my own?!
all dese manz judge a book by its cover
jus kuz am brown dont mean im gna b like all da ofas
walking the le4 streets nd im on my own
f*k every1 else i dont kare where dey go
i'll be the 1 in the studio dropping beats like kano
Comment people wrote them yesterday. Thanks |
Lax Thats Awesome
Keep Them Coming
And Will You Record Any
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Hiz
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Thats great lax! You showed me them at school lol.
And Dan, i was asking him today about getting on the Mic, he said he doesnt want to rush to it lol.
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Danaldinho
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| Hiz wrote: | Thats great lax! You showed me them at school lol.
And Dan, i was asking him today about getting on the Mic, he said he doesnt want to rush to it lol. |
Oh Well He Should
Because He Will Be Good
And That 'Veesh' Seems Good Aswell
I Went On His Myspace
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Hiz
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Lol, yeah, he's great. At our school, in year 10 aswell Great friend
I've got some of his tracks, their wicked!
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Danaldinho
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Yea
I've Heard 3 Aswell Off His Site
And There Good
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Lax
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| BEB wrote: | Im sorry I dont get how you can class 'rapping' as actual music.
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I agreee with you, rapping is not music, it only turns into music when you have enough bars and you have the right beat. Thanks everyone for your support. Yeah I don't want to rush to the mic, wait about 6 moths - 1 year. Yeah Veesh is sik (H)
Thanks again for the support
-Lax
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Danaldinho
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Ok Lax
And No Probs
Just Look Forward To Hearing Some More
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Lax
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Here's some new ones
it's like bro's b4 hoes
and dahs how the rhym goes
gash nd doe will come and go
but all i'm saying is... BOY BETTER KNOW
as the night falls and the sun goes down
n*****s come out so stop playing around
jab u up nd turn u in2 lost and found
LE4 boy this is my home town
in this situation u gta fink
time goes fast u kant even blink
manz hating u will spike ur drink
so boy dont go round wearing pink
kuz u eint no motherf**** pimp
Thats jus life b gta learn from it
jus gta put up wid all dah shit
from all da gyaldem and der prix
di**** kant mc jus suk ****
they get on the mic and tork about shanks
but when they were riting der bars dey were having a w***
ur lyrics are rubbish so jump of a plank
wen im on the mic im known as that lyrical champ
Comment pease
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Hiz
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Nice bars their lax!! Well done, keep up the spirit!
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Danaldinho
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Brilliant Lax, Your Getting Better Every Time
And I Just Edited The N Word As I Think It Could Be Counted As Racism
Hope You Understand
Anyway Congrats Again
Keep It Up
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Lax
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so happy nw im single nd free
the expression on ma face kant u c?
but in a few dayz gna have gyalz chasing me
kuz they say: LAX is that lyrical g
LAX has arrived and is on the mic
tell u rite nw im nt all bout the hype
ill spit bout me nd ur wife
u mite get vxd but that is life
Thanks people, keep commenting
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Danaldinho
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Lax, There Awesome
You Are Getting Better Every Time
You Keep Posting Them Aswell
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Hiz
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Lol, great lyrics their lax! Made me laugh!
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Lax
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it was lust not luve
get it in ur hed get it in ur mind
kuz from 2007...
ur heart isnt wot i wna find
u say ur sorry
but LAX sed go die infront of a lorry
so dnt gimme no grief or dnt chat folly
widout u, now ma lifes turnd jolly
atleast i gta shed no more tears for u
i no ur gna cum running back
after u herd dis lyrically injected trak
but u noe wa gyalz like u need a slap
Thanks Comment again please
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Hiz
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Thats quick! They are great aswell! But the ones before were better lol, made me laugh.
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Lax
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i have no meaning 2 ma life
ders suttin missing...ow ye i gt no wife
all i got now are ma lyrics and my mic
so rudeboy u bes step down b4 i pull out ma knife
i spit better every day so cum watch me spray
beef comes ma way ill merk u like no ofa day
went at june but im back at may
i eint gowing no where LAX is here 2 stay
see'ing u unhappy makes me cry
kant cheer u up no matter how hard i try
wid out u online msn's jus dry
i jus wish me and u can fly away soo high
never wna c u unhappy neva wna c u cry
kuz lax will wipe ur tears dry
dont kare hw hard it is am neva gna stop trying
kuz bby i luv u soo much and i eint even lying
life is gna have ups and downs
defo gna turn ur smile in2 a frown
but bby replace dah wid ma crown
kuz my love will turn ur life around
i'll take away all ur sadness nd madness 4rm ur life
make it sweet and simple as ur ma wife
take care of our kids and spit on the mic
throw away my ghat and wont play wid ma knife
story of ma life is so complicated
i wna get 2 the top and be high rated
u kant spit u sound so constipated
end of ma bars nd u betta be appricating.
What do u think?
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Danaldinho
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There Goodens Aswell
You Are Posting Some Awesome Bars Lax
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Lax
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Thanks man
ma bars are faster than your broadband cable
i keep getting calls from record labels
wnt 2 sign me so der putting doe on the table
i eint gettin nervus. lax is stable
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Danaldinho
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Wow, There Excellent
They Are Really Good
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Hiz
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Nobody posting anymore?
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Danaldinho
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We Need Lax Back On
Hes Not Been On For A While
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Hiz
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Yeah, it's because we have maths and english coursework to hand in this week. Thats why i've not been on as much.
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Lax
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^^^
That's why I havent been on and also becuase my whole pc is messed up, should be up and running back on thursday, will post new ones then, got loads new ones and hopefully u will like them too. Also why don't some of u post some, Dan I helped you out on urs lol they were jokes. Catch you ppl later
take care
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Lax
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Jus w8ing for that special gyal 2 walk in ma life
Stand by me and treat me right
Respect every word of the bars I write
Let’s just say I believe in love at first sight
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BEB
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Ok then lax, no worries, hope to see you back on soon
Nice rap BTW
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